The Perch


I got several comments on the bird so I tried to do a little more to make him stand out just a bit more.   the top pic is revised and the lower is what I had previously.  Also shot the top pic in the sunlight so you can see more of the color.Added more darks and lightened the background around him.  since the name is the perch, I think we should be able to pick him out better.

Your thoughts are appreciated.

Comments

hmuxo said…
LOVE......LOVE it! This is one of my favorites Nelvia!!!!! The texture on the antique machinery is absolutely perfect! The bird is PERFECT!!!!
December 7, 2016 at 1:17 PM
Unknown said…
Maybe darken a little behind the bird as he still seems hidden in the background - otherwise perfect.
December 8, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Mellowood Gallery said…
You can't please everyone - lol. However, I do think the bird stands out better now. Well done, Nelvia.
December 8, 2016 at 10:57 AM
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