In The Flow II


     In The Flow II, I wasn't really happy with how this picture came together.  As Val mentioned, the big blob gray fish wasn't reading correctly.  So I changed it up, experimented with adding more background and leaves overlapping the fish themselves to see if could add depth, added in the water bubbles.  Hoping everyone else thinks this is an improvement.  Am thinking of putting it into the shop but don't want to add crappy work - so your thoughts?  Thanks for stopping by and letting me know your thoughts.

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Mellowood Gallery said…
This is much better and it leaves something to the imagination - is it a leaf or another fish? I like the touch with the bubbles and the debris over some of the fish too. Well worth putting in the shop!
December 6, 2015 at 11:46 AM
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